\nOn October 31, 2012, C.L. wrote, …how many times do you edit on your own before you send your work to your editor? How long do you wait before editing a book you just finished writing? What do you do while you’re waiting to edit one book? How many edits do you tend to go through before you’ve found you absolutely can’t do anything more to a book?<\/i><\/p>\n
For those of you who haven\u2019t yet discovered this, it\u2019s generally not a good idea to start revising the moment after you finish a story. For me, I tend to think everything I’ve just written is brilliant and perfect. Some writers are convinced that their new work is drivel. Neither opinion is objective. We writers need time to let us see clearly.<\/p>\n
My answers to C.L.\u2019s questions change as time goes on. My process also depends on the editor I\u2019m working with. So let me answer chronologically.<\/p>\n
Since I began writing and hoping to get published in 1987, I\u2019ve sought outside opinion pretty early in my process. My first effort was an art appreciation book for kids, an intolerably long picture book about a desperately ill eagle who\u2019s the king of the birds and a sparrow who thinks he\u2019s ugly. I included pencil drawings by me of birds and reproductions of famous artwork. A published children\u2019s book writer lived on my block. She was kind enough to read my manuscript and blunt enough to tell me I couldn\u2019t write. Undaunted (I don\u2019t know why not!), I showed the manuscript to a few librarians who were more encouraging. I don\u2019t know how many times I revised that book before I sent it into the world. Probably not enough. I leaped before I looked.<\/p>\n
When no one wanted that book I really began my children\u2019s book writing education by taking a class. With some of the other students I formed a critique group. And I joined the Society of Children\u2019s Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI), which I\u2019ve mentioned many times here. Through SCBWI I learned about publishing and I started sending manuscripts out, only picture book manuscripts because at that point I hadn\u2019t mustered the courage to try a novel. My process was to present a manuscript to my critique group. If the criticism was light I revised and started sending. In those days you could send unsolicited manuscripts directly to publishers. If the criticism was heavy, I revised and then showed the story to my critique pals again before sending out. Maybe I revised a dozen or more times. With picture books, because they\u2019re so short, revision goes fast. When I stopped it was because I thought I\u2019d made my story as good as it could be.<\/p>\n
Mostly I got form rejections, which tell you nothing. Basically, they thank you for submitting and wish you luck placing the manuscript elsewhere. I\u2019d guess that these days agents send out something similar.<\/p>\n
Occasionally I\u2019d get more, maybe a scribble on my cover letter suggesting how my manuscript might be improved. That kind of comment was gold. I\u2019d revise madly and resend.<\/p>\n
As time went on I started getting more substantive responses from editors, who became sort of extensions of my critique groups. None of them, however, loved a story enough to buy it.<\/p>\n
Whenever I sent out a manuscript, it was because I\u2019d made it as good as I knew how to. I didn\u2019t torment myself about perfection. As good as I could do had to be good enough.<\/p>\n
When I finished a first draft or a revision, I would wait a few days or even a week before looking at it again.<\/p>\n
My process was the same with the first novel I ever wrote, which was Dave at Night<\/i>. The second was Ella Enchanted<\/i>. When I wrote Ella<\/i> I had begun taking a new writing class, the best ever, and our teacher was willing to critique everything we wrote. Each week I handed in whatever I\u2019d written and the next week I got back basically an editorial letter (she had been an editor) and edits right on my manuscript. I also belonged to a critique group of classmates from this class. It was my golden age of becoming a better writer.<\/p>\n
The point is, revision for me has always been part of the writing. Many writers don\u2019t revise as they go. They push through a first draft to get the story and the ideas down, put it aside for however long they decide, and then go back in for the revision. This is a great way to do it, just not my way.<\/p>\n
By the time I reached the end of Ella (with a nearly 200-page detour when I got lost in the middle), it didn\u2019t need major revision. I don\u2019t remember how long I put it aside for but I\u2019m sure I waited a little while before jumping back in. I know I showed the whole thing to my critique buddies at least twice. I didn\u2019t start sending it out until I was so sick of it that just looking at the first page made me a little nauseous. A few of my books have gone out into the world in really really good shape. Ella<\/i> was one of them.<\/p>\n
My critique group shrank to just one person. We were fine for a few years until she got sick and had to stop being my writing buddy. That was hard. I wrote Ever<\/i>, A Tale of Two Castles<\/i>, and two of the Disney Fairies<\/i> books alone, which was rough. I like feedback. I have a new critique buddy now, the wonderful kids\u2019 book writer Karen Romano Young.<\/p>\n
Nowadays, after I type \u201cThe End,\u201d I don\u2019t have to wait very long before diving back in. The reason is that, by the time I\u2019ve gotten to the end I\u2019ve half forgotten the beginning. When I\u2019m writing for my long-time editor at HarperCollins, I\u2019m willing to turn in something that isn\u2019t completely polished. She\u2019s seen my worst and continues to work with me, and she may have ideas that will change my story significantly. If I spend a lot of time on the polish, that effort may be wasted. Maybe I go through the manuscript twice before sending it in. Maybe not even twice.<\/p>\n
But if I\u2019m writing for someone new, I do polish. It\u2019s scary to submit a piece of writing. Nothing I\u2019ve ever written – or ever will write – has been perfect. I don\u2019t know how the editor will respond, so I go over it until I start changing words and then changing them back. That\u2019s when I know I\u2019m done done done.<\/p>\n
While I\u2019m waiting for an editor\u2019s answer, I start something new. It’s not pleasant to sit around waiting. The waiting is hard enough, but if I\u2019m working on a new story I feel productive and not as if everything is riding on this one thing.<\/p>\n
Having said all this, everybody\u2019s different. I like fresh eyes on my work early on, and I like someone else\u2019s take to help me as I revise. It\u2019s hard even to show my writing in its early stages to a critique buddy especially when we\u2019re just starting out together. When I send pages to Karen they\u2019re really rough; my story is just forming itself; I\u2019m exposed as a bumbler who feels my way. That\u2019s scary, but not so scary that it stops me. I’m convinced the rewards are worth it.<\/p>\n
Some writers don\u2019t show their pages to anyone. An editor or an agent may be the first to see. That\u2019s fine too. These writers are probably great self-editors.<\/p>\n
Personality may be a factor. I\u2019m outgoing and not easily squelched. Rejection got me down, but not forever. I popped up again. And popping up again is a quality to nurture in yourselves.<\/p>\n
Here are three prompts:<\/p>\n
\u2219 Your MC has won a writing award. She\u2019s dressing for the award dinner and can\u2019t seem to satisfy herself about the way she looks. Write the getting dressed scene. Make the reader worry that she may never make it to the dinner.<\/p>\n
\u2219 Timothy Toad is competing in a competition to be named Toad of the Year. The contest will be judged by three former Toads of the Year. Timothy Toad isn\u2019t certain exactly what it means to be a great toad. Is he going to be judged on character or looks or hop? Write the story of the contest.<\/p>\n
\u2219 The three members of a writing group find out about a short story contest. They all decide to enter stories and agree that they\u2019re going to critique one another\u2019s entries beforehand so they can be as good as possible. All does not go smoothly, however. There\u2019s tension in the group, which comes out in their communication between meetings and in the meetings themselves. Perhaps not every one of them wants the others to succeed. Write a scene or a story about the process.<\/p>\n
Have fun, and save what you write!<\/p>\n
On October 31, 2012, C.L. wrote, …how many times do you edit on your own before you send your work to your editor? How long do you wait before editing a book you just finished writing? What do you do while you’re waiting to edit one book? How many edits do you tend to go […]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":[],"categories":[97,4],"tags":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/gailcarsonlevine.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/84"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/gailcarsonlevine.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/gailcarsonlevine.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gailcarsonlevine.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gailcarsonlevine.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=84"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/gailcarsonlevine.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/84\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":362,"href":"https:\/\/gailcarsonlevine.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/84\/revisions\/362"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/gailcarsonlevine.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=84"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gailcarsonlevine.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=84"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gailcarsonlevine.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=84"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}