{"id":226,"date":"2010-05-12T21:52:00","date_gmt":"2010-05-12T21:52:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/gailcarsonlevine.com\/blog\/2010\/05\/12\/more-talk-about-talk\/"},"modified":"2015-05-23T23:17:15","modified_gmt":"2015-05-23T23:17:15","slug":"more-talk-about-talk","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/gailcarsonlevine.com\/blog\/2010\/05\/12\/more-talk-about-talk\/","title":{"rendered":"More talk about talk"},"content":{"rendered":"

Before I get to this week\u2019s question, I want to let everyone know about two appearances coming up this summer. For members of the Society of Children\u2019s Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI), I\u2019ll be speaking at the national conference, which will take place in Los Angeles from July 30th to August 2nd, although I won\u2019t get there until July 31st. Here\u2019s the link: http:\/\/www.scbwi.org\/Conference.aspx?Con=6<\/a>. I intend to talk about subjects that have been raised on the blog, so thanks to all of you for making my speech easier to prepare.<\/p>\n

To those of you who are writing for kids but aren\u2019t members of SCBWI, I hope you\u2019ll consider joining the biggest writers\u2019 organization in the world and the most welcoming.  For kids who are writing for kids, sorry, you need to be at least eighteen to join.<\/p>\n

The second appearance is for high-school-age people and above. It\u2019s a conference called The Gathering, and it will be held from July 15th to 18th in La Plume, PA. I\u2019ll be discussing my book Ever<\/i> and also running a workshop on writing for kids. This will be my fourth year doing the workshop but my first as a featured speaker. The conference is always fascinating, good food, okay accommodations, great ideas. This year\u2019s topic is Chaos and Creativity. Here\u2019s the link: http:\/\/www.gathering.keystone.edu<\/a>\/.<\/p>\n

In June I\u2019ll be touring for Fairies and the Quest for Never Land, but I don\u2019t know where I\u2019ll be yet. I\u2019ll post my itinerary when I get it.<\/p>\n

On March 4, 2010, Amy Goodwin wrote… How do you write believable dialogue that is unique to each character’s personality? Every time I try it seems to come out sounding so much like me and more straightforward than I want it. They all seem to say what they think and not think either logically or in directions that suit their characters. How do you get around this and write dialogue that shows characters\u2019 personalities and gets the story moving at the same time? I’m pretty clueless on both.<\/p>\n

When you are working out what a particular character is like, think about how she might express her nature in speech. Figuring this  out may take you an entire book or three revisions of the book, but that’s okay,  I get to know my characters slowly. You can give her a speech mannerism in the first seven chapters and decide it doesn\u2019t work in the eighth and remove it or exchange it for something else in revision.<\/p>\n

If you\u2019re developing a ruthless character, for example, you might make her interrupt often, without thinking about it, possibly without being aware of her rudeness. She wants what she wants, and she doesn\u2019t care what anyone else has to say on the subject. A character who thinks he knows everything may also interrupt – same behavior, different reason.<\/p>\n

In my Disney Fairies books, the character Rani, who sympathizes with everyone, tends to finish people\u2019s sentences for them, sometimes correctly, sometimes not. When the reader sees a sentence completed by a second character, he knows Rani is the speaker.<\/p>\n

There are lots of devices – and you can invent your own – to make a character\u2019s speech special for that character and revealing of her inner nature. In life, everyone expresses himself uniquely. You and I have different ways of speaking. We use some expressions more often than others. I may speak in exclamations, you in questions. I may fly from topic to topic. You may stick to the point. A friend may speak so softly that you constantly have to ask her to repeat. Someone you\u2019ve met acts as if everyone else is deaf. I haven\u2019t nearly exhausted the possibilities; they\u2019re legion.<\/p>\n

And then there are the gestures that accompany speech. Somebody, perhaps a schemer, twists a length of hair around her finger when she\u2019s lying. Manic Uncle Jack uses his hands constantly as he speaks. Secretive Alma never uses her hands. Insecure Mary moves with you while she talks so you can never avoid meeting her eyes. Bashful Stephan addresses his shoes.<\/p>\n

In a movie or a play, this is enviably easy. The audience sees the characters do their physical bits, and the actors have tonal qualities too. We can identify such and such an actor with our eyes closed. But on the page, we have to remind the reader now and then. Someone needs to say to Stephan, \u201cLook at me!\u201d and then the reader will remember that he never does. Somebody has to say to Mary, \u201cGet out of my face!\u201d<\/p>\n

If the speaker is a major character, you definitely want his way of speaking to go with his nature. If it\u2019s a minor character, you can go generic, mention an accent, for instance, or nothing. Not everyone needs distinctive speech, as long as the reader knows who\u2019s talking.<\/p>\n

Amy, if your characters always sound like you, then you know how you sound, which is good. Try underlining the parts of dialogue in your stories that sound just like you. In  notes, list five other ways of saying the same thing. Think about how your sister might say a particular bit of speech, your brother, your best friend, your worst enemy, a teacher or former teacher.<\/p>\n

As for dialogue contributing to plot, except for out-of-control events, most of plot grows out of character, and dialogue is an expression of character. Let\u2019s go back to the ruthless character. Suppose she interrupts someone in authority once too often… A plot event happens. Or suppose her interruptions irritate Stephan so much that he actually yells at her. Yelling and surviving it changes him. Maybe yelling at the ruthless character gives him the courage to declare his love for Mary.<\/p>\n

Although in general you do want your characters to sound different from one another, you don\u2019t want to overload the reader with a circus of exotic talkers. Usually somebody has to tell it like it is, and often (but not always) that will be your main character. Your main character, if you are telling the story from his point of view, is present in every scene and is the voice the reader will hear in her mind.<\/p>\n

Also, once you have established your characters (on the first go-round or in revision), the reader will help you. If shy Stephan is in a scene, the reader will remember (after being reminded a few times) that he\u2019s looking at his shoes or mumbling or blushing. Part of the reader\u2019s pleasure will be in this insider knowledge. If a teacher booms at Stephan, \u201cSpeak up, young man!\u201d the reader will squirm right along with him.<\/p>\n

In these prompts, think of characteristic ways of speaking, including gestures, for everybody:<\/p>\n

\u2022 Three different characters habitually address everyone as Sweetheart<\/i>, and each of them means something else by it. Write a page of dialogue for each one that shows what the speaker intends to convey.<\/p>\n

\u2022 Two characters are accusing each other of not keeping promises. Make up the promises they\u2019re arguing over, and write the scene three times, once for each of three different pairs of characters. In each case, what would be the plot consequences of the argument if you put it in a story? If you like, write the story.<\/p>\n

\u2022 A character wants to do something that is certain to turn out badly. Two of his or her friends are trying to talk him or her out of it. Make up the foolhardy act. Decide ahead of time or as you write or in revision whether or not the friends succeed. Write the scene.<\/p>\n

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