{"id":215,"date":"2010-07-28T11:53:00","date_gmt":"2010-07-28T11:53:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/gailcarsonlevine.com\/blog\/2010\/07\/28\/story-hopping\/"},"modified":"2015-05-23T23:17:15","modified_gmt":"2015-05-23T23:17:15","slug":"story-hopping","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/gailcarsonlevine.com\/blog\/2010\/07\/28\/story-hopping\/","title":{"rendered":"Story Hopping"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>On April 9, 2010, maybeawriter wrote, &#8230;<i>what should you do if you have too many ideas, and can&#8217;t seem to finish any?<\/i><\/p>\n<p>And on July 7, 2010, Alex wrote, <i>My brain runs a lot faster than my hands can type (think race car to horse-and-buggy), and I often change my ideas as I write. I become bored with one idea, get another one, start work on that, and then become bored with the new one. In other words, nothing ever gets done and I have folders overflowing with unfinished work and abandoned stories. I can&#8217;t remain true to an idea or story for long, and it&#8217;s so annoying! Is there a way to make myself keep working on a story, and stop losing interest in it?<\/i><\/p>\n<p>This isn\u2019t one of my problems, but I have a few theories about what may be going on.<\/p>\n<p>You may not have written enough stories to have found one you want to stick with, or you may not have developed the skill to keep yourself happy with a story you\u2019ve started.&nbsp; The story may not yet live satisfactorily on the page.&nbsp; I mean satisfactorily for you, no one else.&nbsp; The solution is to keep writing, new stories, old stories, abandoned stories that you\u2019ve returned to and may abandon again.&nbsp; You\u2019ll get better and be able to carry a story further, maybe not the very next story, but gradually.<\/p>\n<p>Or the difficulty may be self-criticism masquerading as too many ideas.&nbsp; The story you\u2019ve begun sours on you.&nbsp; It\u2019s not going the way you\u2019d hoped.&nbsp; You suppress the thought that&nbsp; maybe you\u2019re not much of a writer and leap into something new.&nbsp; That suppressed doubt is there, though, and needs to be brought out into daylight and then slapped around.&nbsp; <i>Shut up! <\/i>you have to tell it.&nbsp; <i>Story judgment day hasn\u2019t arrived.&nbsp; I\u2019m just getting started.&nbsp; I\u2019m exploring this story, and I\u2019m learning how to write<\/i> (as every writer is, no matter how experienced).&nbsp; Then soldier on with the original story.<\/p>\n<p>It\u2019s also possible that your story idea isn\u2019t big enough to take you very far.&nbsp; What interests you may be just one thing, and once you\u2019ve written that, you\u2019re done.&nbsp; The story isn\u2019t finished, but you don\u2019t know where to go with it, so you hop onto something else.&nbsp; <\/p>\n<p>Think about whether that something else can fit into the story you dropped.&nbsp; See if you can meld the two into a larger framework that will accommodate many new ideas.&nbsp; Suppose, for example, you want to show how one of two sisters always has the upper hand in their relationship.&nbsp; You write an argument between them, and you prove your point, but it\u2019s just a scene, and you don\u2019t know what to write next, and up pops an idea for a story about the last dinosaur.<\/p>\n<p>Well, what if you put the two ideas next to each other?&nbsp; One sister finds the dinosaur and the other gets involved somehow too.&nbsp; You still have the sisters\u2019 problem relationship, but now you also have a dinosaur to broaden the difficulty.&nbsp; The dinosaur can have its own personality and may prefer one sister to another, for instance.&nbsp; You\u2019re tootling along with this until it peters out too, and a forest story beckons you.&nbsp; Can you bring the sisters and the dinosaur into forest?&nbsp; Maybe this seems like a rambling kind of story, and it may not work in the end, but you\u2019ll still have a longer piece than you usually get.&nbsp; Then again, it could develop.&nbsp; Our minds are good at making connections.&nbsp; While you\u2019re writing the forest part, your subconscious will be putting pieces together.&nbsp; It remembers a detail from the first scene &#8211; a promise the sisters made to each other at the end of their argument &#8211; that completes everything.&nbsp; Or you may think of an even larger story idea to unite the threads.<\/p>\n<p>Here\u2019s another possibility: You\u2019re happily writing when a new idea arrives.&nbsp; The first story is going well, but the new idea is so shiny and thrilling that you can\u2019t resist it.&nbsp; If you keep a list of story ideas, as I do, you can jot the idea down including all its wonderful aspects in a paragraph or two, without writing the story itself.&nbsp; Then return to your first story.&nbsp; The itch and the tingle are likely to go away because the new idea is satisfied that it won\u2019t be forgotten.&nbsp; You can do the same thing with your next idea and your next.&nbsp; The benefit is that you\u2019ll have a long list of great ideas, plus a finished story.<\/p>\n<p>Notes may help, as I\u2019ve written a zillion times on the blog, notes about your new ideas (as I just suggested), about where your old story might go, about how bored you are and how frustrated.&nbsp; I find complaining in notes enormously satisfying.&nbsp; Also, in notes you can explore an idea before you start writing to see if you think it\u2019s one you\u2019ll want to stay with.&nbsp; But don\u2019t use notes to criticize your ideas or deep six them without giving any a spin.&nbsp; Don\u2019t let notes choke off your creativity.<\/p>\n<p>This may help too:&nbsp; Imagine an ideal reader who adores your work and can\u2019t wait for the next installment of The Tale of the Lost Dinosaur or whatever.&nbsp; As you write, think, She\u2019s going to love this.&nbsp; Concentrate on what she might enjoy next.&nbsp; And if, in spite of everything, you drop the story, your perfect reader won\u2019t criticize; she\u2019ll simply be eager for your next effort.<\/p>\n<p>Along similar lines, you can talk to a friend about a dying story and see if he has any thoughts that will breathe more life into it.&nbsp; Sometimes a new perspective will show you your story\u2019s potential.<\/p>\n<p>You might try NANOWRIMO, National Novel Writing Month, link here:&nbsp; <a href=\"http:\/\/www.blogger.com\/goog_1530034596\">http:\/\/www.nanowrimo.org\/eng\/hownanowork<\/a><a href=\"http:\/\/www.nanowrimo.org\/eng\/hownanoworks\">s<\/a>.&nbsp; You commit to writing a 50,000 word novel between November 1st and 30th.&nbsp; It\u2019s free, and the commitment might keep you going, plus the support of other participants.&nbsp; If you succeed, it\u2019s a tremendous accomplishment.&nbsp; If you fail, you get much credit for trying.<\/p>\n<p>I don\u2019t think it ever works to chain yourself to a story you can\u2019t summon any more interest in.&nbsp; If you\u2019ve reached that point, move on and don\u2019t beat yourself up.<\/p>\n<p>In the end, nothing matters if you keep writing, because eventually &#8211; but only if you keep writing &#8211; you\u2019ll finish something.&nbsp; I\u2019m sure of it.&nbsp; And meanwhile you\u2019re living a writing life, that is, a thoughtful, creative existence loaded with deeper meaning.<\/p>\n<p>To people reading the blog, if you\u2019ve had this problem, please weigh in with how you solved it.&nbsp; If you\u2019re still going through it, you can commiserate with maybeawriter and Alex.<\/p>\n<p>The prompt is to go back to an old story, at least a month old.&nbsp; How does it look now?&nbsp; Do you have a few fresh ideas?&nbsp;&nbsp; Have you been working on something since that you can combine with it?&nbsp; Write at least one new page.<\/p>\n<p>You can also use my ideas about the sisters and the last dinosaur and the forest, or parts of them, as a story starter (the last thing someone with too many ideas needs!).&nbsp; Have fun, and save what you write!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>On April 9, 2010, maybeawriter wrote, &#8230;what should you do if you have too many ideas, and can&#8217;t seem to finish any? 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